Making comments and suggestions...
Hi there! I had to correct, make suggestions and comments on Kondakçiu's essay. I felt myself like a teacher during that process. I read each line of her essay and I tried not to glorify Kondakçiu, but to give her feedback because that is a great way of improvement. Her structure was organized in the correct way separated into paragraphs. Her ideas were clear and related with one another. It was a great process. I can't wait to correct, suggest and make comments on the essays of my students in the future. All the best! :)